Notes on Cosmic dash

These are the first impressions of the webcomic Cosmic Dash.

First Genre analysis 

Rebellion bad/status tragic, thriller/espionage/status admiration good, Action holdout prescriptive morality testing

Archplot – 1 Maru 2 Kracker 3 Dash

Demographic guess (generalising here): early teens - 30. No adult audience here. Psychographic science fiction fans jaded by Star Wars and into Ratchet and Clank media-wise.

1.

. Ai as adversial force was the force here, my personal fave was hal-9000 and Bender from futurama.

. Twist on the mad scientist cliche, the tragic scientist. Bittersweet Kimney could use an additional scene, including bucketbot.

. Amusement park, entertainment, Bucketbot! Comic relief.

. Hive mind got it coming; well, it's a cute act and could lead to more complications.

2.

. Orthos had screen time, along with Kracker

With the empire being the adversial. Sombre with Orthos.

. Package felt macguffiny. The infiltration plot felt more sincere.

. Would of liked to see Kracker develop afterwards. Can only draw so much screen time. So understandable.

. Abstractions of backgrounds and intense moments nice touch. Compared to the concrete reality, did not mind at all.

3.

. The father's mercenary life is the adversarial force here. A grudge of a throat.

. Old master is the one with a save, Maru with a matter, yet is Dash holding to principle via not killing? Fave scene: the last flashback, all complications considered.

. Wonder how Dash could have broken a wrist.

Conclusion.

This is Teen stuff, due to the reality complications of being a teacher, David now does freelance and serialised novels. Shame it's underrated. That's the price to pay when everybody can commercially copyright.

The last one I read was the most cognitaiment.

No good sex scenes??

What's with this article.

I was comfy scrolling on Substack and needed to write this. This was followed by a Kink by Not Art. A Madame Bovary, I'm going to get put out; the west has this odd, oxymoronic way of for and against.

I know they have their place, including objectification and sexualisation. To the point of unpleasant saturation with Chuck Palahniuk's snuff. Or Lila's bitter short surprise.

Yet is there a conceptual middle? To leave the condescending lack-of-trust Ensmuttification (whatever that means) and the prudish Hays Code of respectability? 

Well, you can do plotless porn here, no worries. Aliterate audience will eat it up, reduce literature's serious slowness to consumable short beats then call it a day toll done. Nonliteral moments of satisfaction with the curators of those doing their thing.

No meaningful relationalism, just a mere exchange of physical attrative forces. Of overrated thirstrapping and a one-night-stands. Cohere only

Unless

It's to overlook and own up to the mass market mediocrity, then try to seek something hyper-specific. From Golden Boy to the novels that I mentioned.

Or don't own up to it, the barest duty. It's the internet. Cyberspace can feel like that. No taste or chance. Or commodity relations.

Whatever it is, we are still going to see sex sells, for better or for worse.

What is the best craft for the illiterate?

What is the best heuristic that respects Occam's razor more likely? Or the deflationist's first impression of creating the finest grape juice? The highest artificially

Appealing to the short, illiterate feedback loops of erotic perversions for the sake of it.

Then there's the logograms, of not exaggerating the exaggerated, to not lead into hyperbolic messages.

Well, the simple first impression does make sense with the direct advertiser it's making that way.

Simple front impressions.

Bip bip bip.

"plot should be kept under house arrest" Okay fake advice.

Unrelated pic of Tiger Sato, sketch for birthday.

Stephen King said that. Or well, Mr Beast claims to do it, yet the illiterate kids merely watch his business model with his luck.

Story, narratology, all that. Organisation of thought leading into a structure of surprise of play, and not to cheat, with that design intent in mind. To make the unsuspected suspected, or that's what the paradox with fictional suspense belief is. Or the long attempt to play with build-up

Is the be in the leif a aspiration of character and the becoming of that? Virtue ethics-wise.

Cheating with social media'n all that attempt to lower suspense by instant gratification with porn, I've done it myself.

If you know, you know.

The element of surprise and plot, to the modern day, still reminds.

The liar's paradox and all with that chagrin

Here's another Kyle video. With truth/false being explored ( Oh, do recommend that movie)

The Tension of our Gradual impressions

Such is the desire, from the shifting mote on the concentration of consciousness, ascribed to memory with prioritisation on the back of our mind.

Drip, drip, dripping into being and through the synapses to the end.

Then with the being into finalising, an attraction occurs, or well, a view that is.

Can never tell what's out there, lucky me.

Welp, Atleast the microbloggers now.

Public domain, the rawest expression of the commons

 What the means to express oneself and to express the freedom to expression!

Out it goes, and knowing no means of axiology to predetermine itself and form a solid idea, yet. We form the bumps together.

This leads us to our own ways on interchange of ideas and play, so that it is.

Non-binding, primitive, there's no a-prior property right, only when it's revealed and the declaration is done.



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Tragedy of the commons. Pah. More like magic

Fictional Descriptionist

"I just wanted to entertain!!"

Prescribing a doorway instead of describing it and the horizon of expectations, well, with the generativity and creativity that entails.

Unless if somebody does not want to publish the idea for a single audience member, locking it in a vault never to be seen again, (that's another can of worms). It's going to have multiple interpretations of its ontology, only with the semi-autobiographical ways of looking at this, the many editorials shall we will discover the output.

So yeah, even with the prescriptions, it can be for the wrong reasons, from the worst reasons to the best.

 

15 minutes, nobody of the coming race could have predicted the pluralist descriptions that were to happen before.

Wow, have to share this.

Oh how entertainers and stuck within our societal context

Bricolage

 Improvised assemblies, such improvised straight ahead animating that is made as opposed with post-to-post.

That's another word I learned today, that it can stick or not.

What a word where the matter of our words are made to the public rhetoric, will this one stick? Including eudemonic, Bildungsroman, genre, horizon of expectations, complex, conception, edge, gothic, materialism, ideology, and empowerment/vulnerability.

Such as our words and the axiology we assign in our conversational praxis, going forward.

That's literature, though, finding beauty in words.

Mmm, words.

Even eidetic memory is a manner of brain stuff.